Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Pirate of the Revolution

     Author's Note
I wrote this because of the universal theme 'Role Playing' because Hannah Pritchard is playing the role of her brother who got murdered by the enemies in the Revolutionary War. So she is dressing up and getting on a ship for revenge. I also wrote this because of the women that are suspected to do all the house work in the late 1700's. they weren't allowed to do what they wanted with their life which is unfair.


            Hannah Pritchard by Bonnie Pryor is a book based of a teenage girl living in the late 1700’s during the Revolutionary War. Her parents were murdered so she was left all by herself. First, working at an Inn, she found herself dressing up like her brother, Jack Pritchard, and going onto Sea Hawk to get revenge on the enemies who killed her family. While trying to cover up as a boy, someone uncovers her secret and she trusts one man with the secret. Hannah Pritchard is not like any other teenage girl in the late 1700’s she wants more than being a stay at home mom; she wants revenge, and an adventure.
            Women in the late 1700’s are known for just being the house wives who clean, cook, and do laundry. Hannah did not want that to be her future. She wanted to do the dirty work that he father and brother would do outside. Once she found out all the different jobs you could get if she were boy she hopped on that ship and pretended to be her brother. The other pirates on the ship found that ‘Jack’ was not a half bad pirate. Once Dobbs discovers that ‘Jack’ is a girl, he doesn’t really mind all that much because Hannah has already proven herself a good worker. As for her friend Daniel on the ship she confessed to him on herself because she thought that he deserved to know. Same as Dobbs, Daniel does not find that the quality of work will decrease it was just a shock to him. Once everyone on the ship discovered her they did not mind because they have seen that Hannah knows how to work hard and get the job done.
            Even though today we do not only expect women to do all the house work some men still think of women as the stay at home moms. Yet, some of the men are stay at home dads. Society has changed since those times but some people have not. Hannah wanted adventure. But her mom wanted to have a stable home with a happy family. One might sound better than the other or you want both. Every man or women is different and everyone wants different things. Hannah’s mom just did not see that. The down side to all of this is that her mom will never get to see what will become of Hannah. Either if she is a stay at home mom with her maybe soon to be husband Daniel or out on the Sea having more adventures.
            In conclusion Hannah Pritchard got her adventure and now she might be starting an new one with going to the farm with Daniel and starting a family. Hannah has proven that no matter what gender if you put forth a good effort and you want to be different you can. It may have a bad conclusion but trying is better than never doing anything at all.


Tuesday, December 13, 2011

When You Lose Everything You Love, You Fight

Author's Note
This essay is about how the climax in Hannah Pritchard affects the rest of the book and the rest of her life. Also how different things are for her after she became a pirate.   

    Hannah Pritchard is a young girl who went from a wonderful, loving family, to being an orphan with nowhere to go but work. Once she found a job at the inn, she started discovering all the different jobs she could get… if she was a boy. One of the jobs that they were saying she could do was being a pirate on a ship. Next thing you know, Hannah is trying on her brothers clothes and hopping onto a ship playing as a boy, Jack Pritchard. Stepping on that ship is when everything changes for Hannah Pritchard.
     The climax of this book is when Hannah goes on the ship pretending to be her brother because from there on out she must become her brother, talk like him, walk like him, and not act like a girl. What caused this to happen is that the Red Coats murdered her family while she was in the forest getting berries. After that she went and decided that she wanted revenge on the Red Coats and became a pirate.
            For getting on that ship Hannah has to face some consequences. First of all she didn’t have a job that changed from what she was already doing at home. She was still doing the dishes and making dinner for the crew. Also, she had a love interest in a boy named Daniel who was also working there and she couldn’t tell him the truth about her until later.
            Although there were consequences she had life changes experiences from going on the ship, once everyone knew she was a girl they let her stay because she works so hard and does a good job at it. So she got to keep fighting against the Red Coats for revenge. Lastly, Daniel and Hannah then planned to finish the war and get married.
In conclusion The Revolutionary Pirate had a happy ending but also a start of a new beginning for Hannah and Daniel. The Climax had consequences and rewards that affected her whole life after the war. And hopefully, Hannah got the adventure she wanted.
           



Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Mother, Daughter Bonding

Author’s Note
You never know when things are going to completely change for you. You will be fighting with your mom and go to bed without fixing the problem. You come home from school the next day and she got in a car accident during the day. Hannah’s last conversation with her mother wasn’t the best. She leaves for a while and her mom is dead. No goodbyes. I wrote this because it is showing what her moms point of view is.  

     Hannah Pritchard is not the typical girl you would talk to. She doesn’t like to follow all the rules that are made for her and other girls her age. In the late 1700’s you find girls wearing long dresses, not, wearing pants and high socks like the boys do. Hannah Pritchard is the kind of girl that wants to do manual labor like her father and brother, she doesn’t want to follow the typical things that girls are taught to do. For example, dishes, laundry, cleaning. Hannah said “Have you ever noticed that whatever work women do is always waiting to be done again? You will just have to wash those clothes again next month. Dinner will have to be cooked again tomorrow. When father and Jack are done today, the field will be done.” That showed a big part of what Hannah wants in life, an adventure.
            The mom was not aware that that would be the last conversation with her daughter so she saw this as any other day. Hannah was not doing the things that her mom wanted her to do. Like, learning to clean, do the laundry, wearing dresses, and other things typical women would do. Her mother just wanted her to take after her and learn to run a house, because she too would be running her own someday.
            Not knowing that it would be the last conversation they didn’t show their emotions to each other and say their goodbyes. If you were in the situation where you knew it would be the last time you would ever talk to your mom wouldn’t you also tell her you loved her, and give her a big hug? I would. The mom was annoyed with her daughter that she forgot why she loved Hannah so much. Leaving the house on the sour note did not help that it was their last conversation. If they had the point of view of the mother it would show more of a sensitive side and the love for her daughter she has.
            If the book was written in her point of view different emotions would show and make you look at their dilemma differently. It would bring out a sadder side of the story not just a normal day conversation with your mom. The reader is also not aware of the future that is held for Hannah’s mother so you don’t see the conversation as a big deal but if the reader saw it in the mother’s point of view the reader may have a different theory.